So while I was rewatching “Scream Queens” with an eye towards comparing it to “Pretty Little Liars: Original Sin”, I had a strange and horrible feeling. I couldn’t help but feel like “Original Sin” actually used “Scream Queens” for its inspiration. I tried to tamp down that thought by thinking that perhaps they were inspired by the same series, but that didn’t last long before I realized that their slashers were too different for that to be the case. I could argue that “Scream Queens” was inspired by something like “Scream”, but “Original Sin’s” slasher is far more of the unstoppable force of a “Friday the 13th” or “A Nightmare on Elm Street” which does not fit into a “Scream”-style movie.
Now, I don’t think that “Original Sin” was inspired by “Scream Queens”. I think the reason it has a more “Scream”-like structure with a more “Friday the 13th”-like slasher is because they wanted to use that sort of slasher but also wanted the secrets part of the original series, which explains why things ended up the way they were. But that I could see it as being inspired by an excessively over-the-top horror parody and still find that the parody did those elements better is a very bad sign for “Original Sin”.
Let me start with the big similarities. The obvious one is the actual plot, which is similar to that of “The Row” and “Scream Queens” in the sense that its basis is the actions of a group of women in the past that are getting paid back in the present, on people who are not them but are associated with them in some way. Sororities are the big one in the other two works, and a high school clique is the one here. You can see right away that this concept is a really good one for the “Pretty Little Liars” universe — which indeed completely ran on such past sins — but isn’t a good fit for a “Friday the 13th”-style slasher. Someone getting revenge for a past slight is, but keeping that secret isn’t. A mystery around who is the actual killer works better when the killer is more of a normal person who could be everyone — or even multiple people — while “Original Sin”‘s killer is a hulking brute who would stand out in a crowd, and so needs to stay out of sight. That sort of killer also kills people by overpowering them, while a “Scream”-style killer kills by outsmarting them and thinking one step ahead of everyone … which is the perfect sort of replacement for “A”, sticking to their hypercompetent characterization but adding that they kill people on top of that.
This is probably why “Original Sin” failed so miserably with the reveal that the principal was involved and running the show the entire time. For a “Friday the 13th”-style killer, none of that is necessary so there was no mystery to be resolved by that reveal, and so it came completely out of nowhere and seemed unnecessary. A simple “psychopathic killer brutally getting revenge for a past sin” works really well with a “Friday the 13th”-style killer, but if you want a mystery you want a more normal slasher whose killings can reveal hidden and puzzling motives to resolve.
Another big similarity is that both of them build in a double act between the nice girl who looks like the traditional Final Girl and a Mean Girl. Let me talk about the Final Girls first. “Scream Queens” has Grace, whose mother was a member of the sorority and over the objections of her father she wants to join that sorority and make it better. As she notes, she’s the only member who doesn’t have a mother. The same thing is true of Imogen, as Imogen’s mother’s suicide starts the killing — although the slasher, ultimately, didn’t kill her — and is a major issue for Imogen throughout the series. However, “Scream Queens” uses that to advance the plot and the character and “Original Sin” doesn’t. Again, the main reason that Grace joins the sorority is to get a sense of who her mother was and to rebuild something her mother cared about. In addition, Grace believes that she was the child born in the past when the teen mother was left to die so that her friends could dance to “Waterfalls” because, as noted above, she was the only one without a mother, explaining why the killings are suddenly starting now. And, in fact, that ends up being a red herring that raises the issue of why the killings would happen now because it is indeed because the girl born that night has joined the sorority: she’s actually the killer.
In comparison, “Original Sin” doesn’t really do anything with Imogen’s mother issues. It doesn’t explain why she wants to oppose Karen or ended their friendship, for example. It isn’t the impetus for her to run against Karen for Homecoming Queen. It’s totally irrelevant to the overall plot. All it does is come up on occasion when the writers need Imogen to get upset about something, and is hinted at at the very end when the principal comments that her mother took the coward’s way out. But it has no real meaning to the story at all. This is another reason why the principal reveal doesn’t work; Imogen is a main character and yet her story doesn’t relate to that at all, even as a red herring.
“Scream Queens” also gives Grace some character arcs. She starts off with her father being her best friend, who is also a bit overprotective. As things progress, she learns to stand up to him and take risks on her own and he learns to trust her more, with them having a lovely scene where they part after resolving those issues. Imogen doesn’t have a father-figure and her relationship with Tabby’s mother must be sidelined by Tabby’s relationship with her, and so she doesn’t get any arc like that. She does get a boyfriend arc, but it’s also shared with Tabby and feeds into the rapist angle, which is mostly disconnected from the rest of the plot. Grace also gets a boyfriend arc, which works out better as he’s her main compatriot for most of the series, and is more directly related to the plot as he ended up working with the killers at one point and committed a murder. This also creates a great character moment as he talked her out of killing the Dean because it wasn’t like her, but then reveals that he killed in order to find out who the killers were and so turned into the sort of person that he told her not to be, which devastates her. And then he dies before they can resolve that. And then on top of that her father also ended up dating one of the killers who is also killed in a devastating way. The only misstep here is that the two of them don’t really bond over that shared experience — which would have made it matter more to the overall story — but it’s still miles ahead of what “Original Sin” did.
I’ve already talked about how I thought “Original Sin” messed up the “Mean Girl” Karen, but what I had forgotten that both of them actually shared the idea of the main “Mean Girl” being less powerful than one might expect. I had remembered that Chanel — the main “Mean Girl” — wasn’t as strong as she seemed, but had forgotten that the series started out that way. Chanel gets called in to talk to the Dean, and comes in with an attitude of arrogance expecting things to just go her way, insulting the Dean unnecessarily, but the Dean pretty much shuts her down completely and it’s only the intervention of the representative of the overall sorority groups that avoids having the sorority shut down, with a compromise that Chanel hates. But even here, Chanel certainly believes that she has all the advantages and only fails because she runs into someone who just has it completely in for her and isn’t looking out for her own advantage. Moreover, later on Chanel manages to get the sisters to cover up a murder through bribery, showing that she can indeed manipulate people into doing what she wants. To directly compare scenes, in “Original Sin” Imogen and Tabby simply assume that people hate Karen enough that Imogen can beat her in the election for Homecoming Queen, while here when Grace’s friend runs against Chanel for Sorority President her friend says the exact same thing, but then later another sorority sister points out that Chanel will by necessity win because there are only eight girls in the sorority and Chanel’s posse of four will vote for her, so the friend needs to get all of the other votes just to get a tie … and Chanel will win with a tie. This, then, requires some machinations — including getting Chanel arrested — to spin the vote against her … and it still doesn’t work.
In “Scream Queens”, we can see that Chanel is not an ideal manipulator — and we are shown early on that that’s likely because she was a nobody a short year before this — but that she does have some ability and some power and some things she can use directly for leverage to get what she wants. “Original Sin” provides nothing of the sort for Karen. Thus, we don’t really see why Karen has any power at all and the moments where they make her sympathetic only serve to make her sympathetic, whereas for Chanel those moments are character moments that make us think that there might be more to Chanel than meets the eye.
“Scream Queens” even does the “homophobic racist” line better. Yes, the series is over-the-top and so definitely would throw out more incidents, but more importantly the incidents seem to be casual for Chanel, and in instances where there is no benefit to her to express that and, in fact, where it actually hurts her cause to do that (like with the Dean, whom she fires insults about being a lesbian at). Karen gets two small incidents that are not casual and are done to deliberately hurt people or to try to gain an advantage. This time through, I definitely felt that Chanel was that sort of person, and never got that for Karen.
There’s even a Ouija Board scene in the series, but unlike the one in “Original Sin” it’s actually relevant to the plot. The deceased Chanel No2 first tells Chanel that her boyfriend is cheating on her (again) which turns out to be false and gets Chanel in bad straits with him. It then implies that Chanel is a threat to the other Chanels, which gets them to plot to kill her. Then she has a dream/vision from Chanel no2 warning her about the threat and encouraging her to stand up for herself and take charge, which she does, foiling the plot. In contrast, I used the equivalent scene in “Original Sin” as evidence that Imogen was behind the killings because otherwise that scene would have been irrelevant.
So I think that “Scream Queens” used its elements better than “Original Sin” did, especially the ones that they have in common. However, in watching it this time I think the biggest issue is in the sort of slasher “Original Sin” went with. As noted above, a “Scream”-style mastermind slasher would have fit really well with the “Pretty Little Liars” universe, but instead they chose a “Friday the 13th”-style slasher. And then tried to pay it off with a “Scream”-style reveal which didn’t fit. Now, they could have made all that work if they had, say, created a discrepancy in the murders that would have raised questions about what was going on. If the slasher was killing bullies at the school but the texts and some of the murders were tied directly to the revenge plot, then they could have created a set of killers where the principal was trying to keep the slasher on a leash but the slasher’s main goal was stopping the bullying. Heck, it even would have worked if the principal was more interested in killing bullies and cleaning up the school along with the direct revenge. And a benefit of these is that it would have allowed for them to commit more murders, as one of the main issues with “Original Sin” as a horror series was a lack of killing.
As structured, though, it couldn’t do that. There simply weren’t enough killings for either sort of slasher to work. A “Friday the 13th”-style slasher needs more killings to establish the killer as a threat so that we are afraid when the protagonists encounter them, and a “Scream”-style killer needs more killings to establish a pattern that provides a puzzle that makes perfect sense given the reveal. With only about three killings, there’s not enough there to provide either a real threat or a real puzzle. “Scream Queens” used the sorority and university environment to provide for victims that are disposable but can be used to establish a pattern of killings and demonstrate that the slasher was one step ahead of everyone. If they had expanded the victim set to the bullies in the high school, “Original Sin” could have done that as well.
But it didn’t, and I think that’s really where it failed. And that is why I will rewatch “Scream Queens” again at some point and won’t rewatch “Original Sin”‘s first season.
Thoughts on “Troilus and Cressida”
October 26, 2022This play is another historical, and so far the best of those has been “Julius Caesar”. Given that “Hamlet” is supposedly based on history (as is “Macbeth” that is coming up), it might be a good idea for me to outline here what makes me characterize those as dramas while “Julius Caesar” and this play are ones that I characterize as “historicals”. The traits of the historicals, to me, are ones that Shakespeare based on stories that much of his audience probably would have heard of. For the most part, these were famous stories from English history but while I’m not a historian it seems to make sense to me that they would have heard at least some things about “Julius Caesar” and, in this case, the Trojan War, and so the characters themselves would be familiar to the audience. As such, he tends to give them less development than he gives the characters in his dramas, and he also includes more characters and more threads — especially here — than he does in the dramas. Another trait is that in the historicals the title character or characters are actually given much less focus than the other characters. “Julius Caesar” is, in fact, all about Brutus, with Caesar himself playing a very minor role in his own play. This can be contrasted with “Hamlet” where Hamlet himself is the main character and pretty much every plot and character thread can be traced right back to him. They also don’t seem to have a true ending and only lead into later events and possibly later plays, while “Hamlet”, for example, pretty much ends with the death of all the main characters.
The one definitely seems to be a historical because it hits all that criteria. As noted above, the audience probably had some exposure to the Trojan War and Trojan War heroes. Most of the time in the play is spent focusing on Hector, Achilles, Ajax and the Greek and Trojan high command, and the title characters are mostly a minor complication to those plots. There are also a lot of individual plots going on that are, again, only tangentially related, and very little character development is done for any of the characters other than people flat-out stating what their personalities and relationships are. So, given that I prefer the dramas to the historicals, this play was starting off on the wrong foot for me to find it really enjoyable.
The basic plot is, well, the Trojan War, with Achilles sulking in his tent, Ajax taking up the challenge that Hector makes against Achilles, and a lot of consternation over how and why Achilles won’t fight and a bunch of the negotiations and machinations over that, as well as the relationship between Paris and Helen and the like. The plot that involves the main characters is that they are both Trojans and are in love, although Cressida literally plays hard to get for about a scene or two before she accepts it, just in time for the Greeks to demand her in exchange for a Trojan VIP, at which point she goes over there and seems to fall in love with Diomedes, which enrages Troilus and makes him fight like a demon in the upcoming battle (although it is unclear if he ever killed anyone in the battle), while Hector is killed in the battle, which again leaves the ending hanging.
I wanted to like the couple, but Cressida ends up being a completely unsympathetic character. First, she plays hard to get with Troilus, and then when sent to the Greeks when she is admonished not to fall in love with any of them after protesting that she would never do that she ends up rather quickly forgetting all of that. While this makes me sympathize with Troilus’ anger, it makes that entire arc — which is the title arc — rather pointless. This is where I think giving the title arc more space and leaving out some of the other historical arcs would have worked better, because there would have been room to have Cressida be wooed by Diomedes and to expand on her speech of being torn over that, which would have had a much better dramatic and tragic payoff, as Troilus would have been justified in his anger but her shift would have seemed less callous.
One of the reasons I wanted to like her was because Shakespeare does give her some good dialogue which makes it interesting to listen to her, and his dialogue is generally good throughout. As such, I didn’t mind the play at all, but the multiple plots make it seem a bit disconnected. It’s better than some of the other historicals, but then I know more about the Trojan War and so have a similar if not greater connection to that history and that story as Shakespeare’s audience had. So it does seem to me that the historicals do work given the right audience, and the English ones fail more because we aren’t as connected to that history as his audience would be. Still, though, I prefer the straight dramas for the reasons given above. There are indeed some structural issues with the historicals — at least the ones I’ve read so far — that means they struggle to hit the heights that the pure dramas can hit, even as the best ones — “Julius Caesar”, specifically — can be really good plays.
Next up is another comedy in “All’s Well that Ends Well”.
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